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Quick Outline
Oiorpata, literally meaning man-killer. Thus were the ancient tribes of warrior women known. Fierce, fighting man-killers. A few of the tribes, though deadly on the battlefield did live peacefully with men as their helpmates. The women were the hunters and defenders of the society, and the men were held in high esteem as teachers and nurturers of the young. Amrita, a beautiful young Amazon warrior of the more peace-loving Thermyscrians, endures the loss of her mate Tuaok, to the sword of the treacherous Satianne of the murderous Oiorpata and the kidnapping of her three year old daughter, Atileene. After a tortuous sea journey chained as a slave where the ship literally breaks apart around her, Amrita forms an alliance with Taque, a teenage warrior of tremendous agility, Ndoni, a mature visionary Oiorpata Priestess and a wild She Wolf Amrita has befriended. These four, The Amazons, fight a deadly battle to free an oppressed village, overcome the treachery of Satianne and struggle to regain what they have lost.

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               NEXT. THERMISKYRA VILLAGE - EVENING

               The front of Antiope's hut.  Gathered around are Antiope and
               village leaders, of which one is Amrita.

               Others are LIANNE the Priestess...

               MAKIE an elder...

               OLGIER another elder...

               ...and Mikaleta (who led the charge on the left flank) and
               XNATEEN, a women about Amrita's age.

               Wolf lies off to the side.

               The rest of the village is busy gathering up the dead, both
               friend and foe.  They are wrapping the enemy dead and placing
               them in a wagon.

                                   MIKALETA
                         ...who else but Ndoni and Satianne
                         would dare send warriors against
                         us?

                                   XNATEEN
                         Their garments and weapons are not
                         of the Oiorpata tribe.

                                   MIKALETA
                         Trickery of Satianne!

                                   OGLIER
                             (Smoking a pipe)
                         I agree with Mikaleta.  Satianne's
                         witchery and guile are renowned.
                         She would dress and arm her
                         warriors to deceive.


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                                   MIKALETA
                         It is time to attack without mercy. 
                         Satianne and Ndoni have chipped
                         away at us for the last two
                         seasons.  If we do not end their
                         ability for assault now, we will
                         have few able bodied left to fight
                         with.

                                   ANTIOPE
                         How many did we lose?

                                   XNATEEN
                         We were fortunate this time.  Only
                         two dead to nine of the enemy.  But
                         we have many wounded, especially
                         the men that were protecting the
                         children.

                                   MAKIE
                         It would seem that we are causing
                         more losses for them.  It would be
                         foolish for them to continue.  The
                         last few battles have been the
                         same.  They have lost more warriors
                         then we ever have.

                                   LIANNE
                         I would agree.  And I'm sure that
                         Ndoni is advising LaQuia of that
                         fact as we speak here.  It is
                         Satianne that will not abide by,
                         nor care about, the losses they
                         suffer. 

               Antiope has noticed Amrita's silence through this discussion.

                                   ANTIOPE
                         And you, Amrita, what are your
                         thoughts on this?

                                   AMRITA
                             (Choosing her words
                              carefully)
                         I know your desire for peace among
                         our tribes, Antiope.  That desire
                         is widely known.  I fear Satianne
                         might be using that somehow, for
                         another bit of her treachery.


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                                   MIKALETA
                         How can that be?  They continue to
                         attack us!

                                   AMRITA
                         Yes, but with less and less success
                         each time.  I think Satianne is
                         counting on Antiope offering, from
                         her heart, a peaceful settlement
                         before their tribe is destroyed. 
                         And LaQuia being advised by Ndoni
                         of the high casualties, will most
                         certainly entertain the thought of
                         such a peace, but.....

                                   ANTIOPE
                         What are your misgivings, Amrita?

                                   AMRITA
                         Satianne!  I cannot understand why
                         she is ruining these offerings of
                         peace by these blundering attacks.
                         I fear there is something else in
                         her mind. 

               The rest of the group, knowing the makeup of Satianne, nod in
               agreement.

                                   ANTIOPE
                         Nevertheless, we must make the
                         offer.  I do not wish to kill off
                         all the Oiorpata.

                                   AMRITA
                             (Reluctantly)
                         Nor do I.

               Ad-Lib, grunts and reluctant agreement from the rest of the
               group.

                                   ANTIOPE
                         As is our custom, we will return
                         their dead.  I will send a
                         messenger notifying them of this.
                         Amrita, you and Mikaleta and three
                         other peace warriors will accompany
                         the wagon. You will offer this plan
                         to LaQuia and her tribe.

               Antiope gathers them closer to discuss the peace plan...
to be continued...

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