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Oiorpata, literally meaning man-killer. Thus were the ancient tribes of warrior women known. Fierce, fighting man-killers. A few of the tribes, though deadly on the battlefield did live peacefully with men as their helpmates. The women were the hunters and defenders of the society, and the men were held in high esteem as teachers and nurturers of the young. Amrita, a beautiful young Amazon warrior of the more peace-loving Thermyscrians, endures the loss of her mate Tuaok, to the sword of the treacherous Satianne of the murderous Oiorpata and the kidnapping of her three year old daughter, Atileene. After a tortuous sea journey chained as a slave where the ship literally breaks apart around her, Amrita forms an alliance with Taque, a teenage warrior of tremendous agility, Ndoni, a mature visionary Oiorpata Priestess and a wild She Wolf Amrita has befriended. These four, The Amazons, fight a deadly battle to free an oppressed village, overcome the treachery of Satianne and struggle to regain what they have lost.

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               INT. Laquia's HUT - OIORPATA VILLAGE - NIGHT

               A similar gathering, but more heated discussion is going on
               in the hut of the Oiorpata tribal leader, LAQUIA. SATIANNE,
               NDONI and two other elders, QULANNE and BARBRIN are there.

                                   BARBRIN
                         I think Satianne is right, we
                         should attack whenever and wherever
                         we can.

                                   NDONI
                         We are not in declared war with the
                         Thermiskyrians.  I don't understand
                         all this...

                                   LAQUIA
                         Nor I.  This was not agreed to by
                         me.  I ordered Satianne to scout
                         and observe them, not attack,.

                                   BARBRIN
                         But small scale attacks can weaken
                         and demoralize...

                                   LAQUIA
                         Until they return the attack. I
                         fear we would have to be prepared
                         for a tremendous assault in return.

                                   SATIANNE
                         My guards are always posted, in
                         time for plenty of warning.

                                   QULANNE
                         We certainly cannot be weak in the
                         face of the enemy!

                                   NDONI
                         I didn't say we should be weak. I
                         only asked why we consider attack
                         for no reason.

               Satianne just smiles at the argument she has caused.

                                   LAQUIA
                         ENOUGH! This is senseless, since I
                         have ordered no such attacks as
                         yet. And there has been none. Is
                         that not right Satianne?


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                                   SATIANNE
                             (Lying through her teeth)
                         Skirmishes.  None of any
                         consequences.

                                   NDONI
                         But more and more of our warriors
                         are gone...

                                   SATIANNE
                         We've lost many to the slave-
                         traders and some have even joined
                         them to gain the riches they
                         proclaim..

                                   LAQUIA
                         I have heard enough, Satianne.
                         Leave.  All of you,  so that I may
                         consider our course.

               Satianne bows to LaQuia as she and the group leaves the hut.

                                   LAQUIA (cont'd)
                         Ndoni, stay!

               Satianne backs out of the hut, with an ill-concealed
               malevolent glare at Ndoni.

                                                       CUT TO:

               INT. AMRITA AND TUAOK'S HUT - NIGHT

               A low flickering firelight in the center of the hut shows off
               the exquisite bodies of Amrita and Tuaok as they lay amidst
               their fur bedclothes.

               Tuaok's shoulder is bandaged with the poultice but that
               doesn't bind his ardor.

               Amrita is pensive.

               Tuaok is trying to playfully arouse her. He nuzzles her ear.

                                   TUAOK
                         The  stars will not fall from the
                         skies if you stop thinking about
                         the troubles for an hour or so.

               Amrita holds his hand lovingly, but still stares into space.

                                   AMRITA
                         My thoughts are for the safety of
                         our village, Tuaok.  Antiope has
                         ruled that we are to offer peace to
                         the Oiorpata, again.


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               Tuaok's hands move beneath the furs.

                                   TUAOK
                         Is that not a reason to celebrate!
                         Especially with love... especially
                         if they accept the offer this time.
                         It has been more seasons then I
                         care to remember that the children
                         have grown up with this constant
                         warring.

               Amrita rolls over to face him.

                                   AMRITA
                         It is precisely that fact that
                         bothers me.  In war we know our
                         enemy.  In peace we do not.

                                   TUAOK
                         The suspicious mind of a beautiful
                         woman... ah, so glad it is not
                         directed at me.

               He kisses just above her breasts.

                                   TUAOK (cont'd)
                         Do you not think, LaQuia and Ndoni
                         are to be trusted if they vow to
                         Antiope?

               She is now having a hard time resisting Tuaok's gentle and
               persuasive loving.

                                   AMRITA
                         Yes.  I would trust them both
                         almost as I do Antiope, if they
                         were to give their word.  It is
                         Satianne!

               Tuaok halts what he is doing and looks in Amrita's eyes.

                                   TUAOK
                         It is wise to be distrustful of the
                         woman from Hell. But, I have no
                         doubt that LaQuia would be quick to
                         eliminate anyone that went back on
                         a solemn word that she herself had
                         given....that is, if LaQuia is to
                         agree at all.
to be continued...

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