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Quick Outline
Oiorpata, literally meaning man-killer. Thus were the ancient tribes of warrior women known. Fierce, fighting man-killers. A few of the tribes, though deadly on the battlefield did live peacefully with men as their helpmates. The women were the hunters and defenders of the society, and the men were held in high esteem as teachers and nurturers of the young. Amrita, a beautiful young Amazon warrior of the more peace-loving Thermyscrians, endures the loss of her mate Tuaok, to the sword of the treacherous Satianne of the murderous Oiorpata and the kidnapping of her three year old daughter, Atileene. After a tortuous sea journey chained as a slave where the ship literally breaks apart around her, Amrita forms an alliance with Taque, a teenage warrior of tremendous agility, Ndoni, a mature visionary Oiorpata Priestess and a wild She Wolf Amrita has befriended. These four, The Amazons, fight a deadly battle to free an oppressed village, overcome the treachery of Satianne and struggle to regain what they have lost.

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               FADE IN

               EXT. THERMISKYRA VILLAGE - DAY

               The peaceful village of Thermiskyra.  A village where love
               and harmony are hard at work.

               As THE CAMERA travels through the village we see scenes of
               tranquility, but not without readiness, as various weapons
               casually lying around would imply.

               A dog or two sleeps lazily in the sun.

               Chickens and ducks scratch around the grounds.

               Pigs, cattle and horses are munching contentedly in pens.

               Villagers are happily going about routine daily tasks.

               A TEACHER, sitting, is surrounded by MALE children.

                                   TEACHER
                         ...30 sun cycles equal one moon.
                         Twelve of which, in turn are a full
                         season.  When you talk about the
                         age of woman or man you talk in age
                         of seasons......

               THE CAMERA travels past this group to another. This group
               consists of all men working on a loom and some pottery.

               Then on to a group of women.  They are not engaged in any
               particular activity other than talking.

               One woman, MIKALETA, tall with long black hair, is doing most
               of the talking.

                                   MIKALETA
                         ..big cat was stalking the deer and
                         I knew he would go in for the kill
                         when it reached the open plain. The
                         only course of action for dinner
                         that night would be to swear to the
                         sword of Diana that I would not let
                         this beast.......

               THE CAMERA moves on.  We become more aware of the weapons
               stacked around the village.


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               Long strong bows with quivers stocked full of arrows.  Huge
               malevolent looking double-edged swords and distinctive ivy
               shaped shields, and wicked looking long thin javelins stacked
               in tepee-like fashion.

               Again, THE CAMERA happens upon a group of children being
               taught by ANOTHER TEACHER.  This time the group of children
               are all FEMALE.

                                   ANOTHER TEACHER
                         ....and the legend concludes that
                         the Sword of Diana was lost for all
                         time in her final battle with all
                         the world's elements....

               A little 6 year old GIRL jumps up.

                                   GIRL
                         I know, I know what they were....
                         The Land, Fire, Water and Air..

                                   TEACHER
                         That's right.  It was the mightiest
                         battle of all and Diana was....

               THE CAMERA moves on.

               It is strange as we travel around to different groups or
               individuals that the men seem to be happily occupied in what
               we would normally think of as women's tasks, i.e. basket
               weaving, washing, child care and education.  The women seem
               to be engaged in horseplay, re-fighting long-ago battles,
               stringing or sharpening weapons; the traditional roles of
               men.

               One hut stands out among the rest.  It is the village
               leaders' hut.  In front of the hut stand two women in
               conversation.

               The older of the women, ANTIOPE, in her mid-to- late forties
               is tall and very beautiful.

               The other, a mid- twenties strawberry blond, with long
               flowing hair and the face and body of a goddess. This is
               AMRITA.

               At her feet lays a massive, WOLF.

                                   ANTIOPE
                         ...danger only lies in Satianne's
                         power.  But Laquia weighs mightily
                         the counsel of Ndoni.


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                                   AMRITA
                         I agree, Antiope.  I only wish that
                         Ndoni had more control of
                         Satianne's wanderings.  I don't
                         feel that our village is safe when
                         Ndoni takes the "Journeys" leaving
                         Satianne to ....

               THE CAMERA moves on again.  The forest sounds up to this
               point have been natural and tranquil -  birds, insects,
               breezes, rustling leaves and quiet conversations all mingling
               to create a sublime picture of peace and harmony. We have
               traveled through almost all of the small village and returned
               to the Teacher teaching the boy children.  He rises to his
               feet and jams a long staff into the ground.

                                   TEACHER
                         ...one of you now look at the
                         shadow of the staff and tell us how
                         much longer we will have the light
                         from the fire from above for
                         this.....

               Suddenly the forest is silent. The various villagers become
               instantly alert.

               Before anyone can react an arrow strikes the Teacher in the
               chest.  He falls dead amongst the children.
               
              The village goes instantly to arms, but, it is the women that
               bear them, while the men attempt to herd the children to
               safety.

               The attackers stay hidden in the forest for the time being.
               They let loose a fusillade of arrows and spears that are
               devastating to the people of the village.

               The women of the village take cover and fight back as best
               they can.

               We do not see the attackers but we hear screams as some
               returned arrows find marks.

               Antiope takes charge.  She gestures to where she wants the
               different units.

                                   ANTIOPE
                         JAVELINS AND BOWS, TO THE CENTER!
                         SWORDS! TO THE FLANKS!


to be continued...

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